this is the apple and banana writing that me and the class did.
Friday, February 19, 2021
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Hi James
ReplyDeleteThis is amazing because i can tell that you love apples because you have described it really well. this reminded me of when i had my first apple and it was delicious. To improve you could make i bite more writing please.